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Contributed by
detigers28
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Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 10:34:19 PM in AEST
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At night all these emotions pour out of me,
Thoughts about you, me and how we should be
When I'm with you it all seems like a dream,
I'm happy and lifes not as bad as it seems
Just your presence helps in so many ways
You bring joy and excitement into the dullest of days,
I know I've said some dumb things in the past,
But its only cause I'm tryna make you my first and my last
I Could never imagine a more perfect human being,
From the clothes you wear to the songs you sing
You do everything with such kindness and grace,
All I see is compassion when I look at your beautiful face
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Re: You
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 11:46:59 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC.
Beautifull poem.
Great writing.
blessings,
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Re: You
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 23rd September 2009 @ 12:17:10 AM AEST
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sweet... purely genuine and gently passionate. u should hav that person read this, it's worth the read :)
take care
-K.Z.
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