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A single mourner
Contributed by
pooja
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Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 06:20:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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There are no lines of kindness in my face
I have done nothing to deserve heaven's grace
Yet if you try hard,if you look closely
You may find something to pity even in me
Coz the feeling of having no one around me
Hangs around even when thousands surround me
I have never really been there, for those who had needed me
Unworthy though I am, I still stoop to beg for mercy
And a last act of selfishness,I make a final plea
Let some light of God's love shine upon me
And so When I am gone,let there be one who cares
And in my memory sheds a few tears
Let there be a single mourner,who holds my hand as I take my last breath
Lonely all my life, heavens ! do not leave me to loneliness in death...!
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pooja
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2009-09-22 06:20:31]
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Re: A single mourner
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 06:29:19 AM AEST
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| Nice poem...especially verses 3, 5 & 8. Well done. |
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Re: A single mourner
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by myheartsvoice on
Monday, 28th September 2009 @ 01:27:43 PM AEST
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What a touching masterpiece this is, it drew
from me emotions of such relavence, i felt
so bad for you, you are not worthless, weak
maybe, but who amongst us isn't? you write
magnificently, with such conviction, thank you
for sharing this writting . . .
likewise also, for your read and comment . . .
Ben |
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