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I swear
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 09:11:16 PM in AEST
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I swear one day you'll love me
One day I'll be beautiful, not just in mind
One day the one that broke my heart
Will wonder why he dared let me go
I swear one day to recover
From the mistakes I have made
One day I will smile with pure light
Beaming out of every surface
One day I swear to make you happy
I swear one day
I will be happy
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Re: I swear
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 09:51:21 PM AEST
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Cute and good luck.
Blessings,
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Re: I swear
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by navydocny on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 08:20:59 AM AEST
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the last two lines say it all...
happiness is elusive when we wish it to be...
when we wish to be happy, then we are so...
it doesn't take another, it takes self....
Great write as usual,
your pieces always evoke emotion...
Steve |
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Re: I swear
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by LadyRose on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 08:41:21 AM AEST
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| to swear to something is to believe and I also believe that you will be happy! |
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