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my first love story

Contributed by desolantdreamer on Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 09:05:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I still remember the first moment I laid eyes on you
You were beautiful
Fatal attraction at best, I knew in my soul we'd have a story
Never would I have known a year later here I'd stand
Looking up at you, my best friend
You're still beautiful
Everything I could ever want
Everything I could ever need
Perfect even in flaw
You look down at me, animated in a story
Your dark eyes glowing, as if a flame burned in your heart
And you're so beautiful
We belong together
The song sang in the background, as if it knew
But we wont be together
My precious Romeo
But I still can't stop smiling
You're just so beautiful
This tragic tale of love burns, writing itself
A love so pure, so unrevokable
To do what I must, what will make you happy
Because when you smile
You're beautiful
Sacrifice myself for you
I want you to be happy
You want me to not love you anymore
So goodbye my best friend, I cannot see your face again
Nor hear your hypnotizing voice
Limited to just typed words
Because if you want me to be over you
I must not see your face
You're too beautiful
I know in my heart I won't ever move on
But it's what you want
So I must try
A love so pure
It's soaked with tears

Copyright © desolantdreamer ... [ 2009-09-21 21:05:21]
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Re: my first love story (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 09:41:21 PM AEST
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Incredibly beautifull with the touch of sad.
blessings,
emy

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