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~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
Contributed by
Jenni_K
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Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 07:33:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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~~xXx~~
We have set our parting for the morrow,
Knowing it will bring such sorrow.
We have shared so many happy years
I know that very soon I’ll be in tears.
We’ve been together from the very start.
I never imagine we’d ever have to part.
I blame myself for neglecting you
Now there’s nothing left for me to do.
There was a time you brought nothing but joy
Today…all you ever do is annoy.
The only thing you bring me now is pain
Believe me, I try so hard not to complain.
Each time I think of what lies in store
My tears keep falling more and more.
The actual parting will cause so much pain
I’m sure I’d want to jump in front of a train.
The Next Morning:
The time is right to rid myself of you.
As of now, you and I are through.
It is now time for the moment of truth
The dentist is ready to extract my tooth!!
OUCH!!!!!!!!!!
~~xXx~~
Copyright ©
Jenni_K
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 07:46:51 PM AEST
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(((((((((((((((((( Jenni )))))))))))))))))))
This is great. I am so glad I do not read ahead as it would have ruined the entire thing for me!!!! L O blanking L you have got me falling out of my chair.
As I was reading, I'm thinking, gee, I do not want to be that dude and I wonder what poem of Spud's she is referring to.
*laughing as he ends that line*
Thank you, my cheek muscles needed the exercise. :-)
Tim
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 08:10:53 PM AEST
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Oh jen you really had me going on this one.
You've always had a knack for this type of writing. You do it better than any one I know.
big smiles, huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by spud on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 12:17:44 AM AEST
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Hi Jenni,
Brilliant! For a while I was wondering what poem
it was that you were referring to - but you kept
me hanging there until the ending. The punchline
is right on the nose!
Speedy recovery to you, Jenni!
Tommy
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by holy on
Thursday, 8th October 2009 @ 11:26:40 PM AEST
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Hi, dear sister:
I come back. How are you? miss you a lot!
I am glad that you are staying here and writing beautiful poems, I LOVE and ENJOY THEM VERY MUCH!
Welcome to help me again. Love you and hugs! |
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 16th October 2009 @ 12:03:28 PM AEST
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Lol you still got it Jenni! Good write was not
expecting the end such sadness over a tooth.
Haha very well written though liked the
rhyming and what not. Keep it up!
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 21st October 2009 @ 06:21:53 PM AEST
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Oh Jenni,
I was going to tell you how Jaeann is going through the very same thing, and how I went through it too. I was so proud of you when I could feel the end coming..........then you dumped me right in the Dentist chair, and I swear..........that was harder than riding myself of my "painful" former husband!!
*giggles* I owe you one dear.
Enjoyed this one for all it's worth!
hahahahahahaha
Warm love
consue |
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 24th November 2009 @ 05:03:10 PM AEST
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he he he, you always did have a way to get me lol, great cute write,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by blumentopf on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 12:29:08 PM AEST
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Oh Jenny!
Having been away so long, I did not recall the degree and acuity of your wit..
Now I have learned for good what LOVE is all about, ever so much more uncomplicated as a breakdown into categories, like the famous "4", and love's root is likewise simplified, = i.e. a Root Canal Procedure..
Brilliant !
Love
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Re: ~Parting Is Such Sweet Sorrow~
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 12th December 2019 @ 04:30:20 AM AEST
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| Lovely and spirited. Loved it! |
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