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Believing
Contributed by
recyclebin
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Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 11:03:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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One day,
Dance with the wind.
Over the horizon,
Follow the heart blind.
One day,
distinguish where those stars go.
Dark side of the moon,
witness the golden glow.
One day,
Search for the hue.
Soul unhindered,
Conviction tried and true.
One day,
Dreams come true.
It will not be painless,
Ambition was never intended to.
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recyclebin
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2009-09-20 23:03:43]
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Re: Believing
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by Ambivalence on
Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 11:08:19 PM AEST
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wonderful! the last stanza puts the icing on the cake. it should be a famous quote :D great job
take care
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Re: Believing
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 07:17:00 AM AEST
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I agree that the last stanza should be a famous quote!
How exceptionally put!
bin, I love how your verses all flow together with a cohesiveness that
escapes a lot of poets, and yet they can honestly stand on their own
as works of art with genuine inspiration. This was explosive to my own
soul as the words seared right through me. Excellent writing, my friend.
~ Breezy
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