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Can I Call You Daddy
Contributed by
vegastar
on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 06:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can a lifetime of blame disapate
My mother too consumed to show she cared
Too busy reminding me you were never there
Twisting the knife I never asked for Longing for love I never knew
Inside a little girl
She reaches out wih nothing left to give
She sacrifices herself in hope to gain the love she never had
So please take her hand
Help her understand
Let the peices start to mend
So she can stand a whoman whole nd then
She'll know she has a daddy
One who shelters her from the wayward winds
Dry her tears when the rains decend
Explore together her hopes and dreams
And guide her down lifes paths and streams
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2003-03-31 18:05:00]
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Re: Can I Call You Daddy
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by Ilhar on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 06:16:54 PM AEST
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beautiful sentiment...my son has not been able to be in his daughters life and it is tearing him apart...I hope things work out for you and your dad
Sharon |
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Re: Can I Call You Daddy
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by M on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 10:34:24 AM AEST
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I don't see my Dad anymore either. i hope everything works out for you in the end, i know i want it to for me, so my hopes are with you. A very sad poem, well writen.
Emily |
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Re: Can I Call You Daddy
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 10:08:11 PM AEST
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| this is great and your last four lines are very beautiful:) hugs nessa |
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Re: Can I Call You Daddy
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by GreenLady89 on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 08:35:15 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poem. My father technically has been a part of my life, but his heart and love were/are absent, so he might has well not have been. I understand your pain. Nice poem..... |
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