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Daddy..
Contributed by
Obscured_Existance
on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 02:19:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
FamilyPoems
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Please dont push me aside,
For I've done no wrong..
All of these years
Youre love is all I've longed
You were someone I thought
Who'd be there by my side
Through heartache and pain,
Happiness and pride
As a young girl I knew
You would look out for me
But now youre so distant
Its hard to believe
That you would become
A stranger once more
Closing your heart
And closing your door
I know I'm not perfect
But cant your eyes see?
I always had loved you
Dont you still love me?
My life without you
Cant be the same
What did I do wrong ?
Am I really to blame?
So hear me please
When I beg you to know
Im lost without you
Daddy in my heart you'll remain so...
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Re: Daddy..
(User Rating: 1 )
by spud on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 07:29:02 AM AEST
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Hi,
Sad ... and sadder still that there is only one man
who can fill this gap that you have.
Thinking of you.
Tommy
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Re: Daddy..
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by Antzus on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 08:51:52 AM AEST
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| The desperation is painful to read. Taking on a child-like perspective works great. It really confronted me. |
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