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Fright Night
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 12:59:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shadows dance
in the moonlight,
invisible residents creep
slowly
across creaky wooden floors...
Voices whisper
and
I shiver
as I get the feeling
I am not alone.
A eerie sensation overwhelms me
I listen with my eyes
cause I
thought I heard something moan,
a sudden rush of fear
and I'm running
but unseen forces grab me
and won't let me go.
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unknown_utopia
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2009-09-18 00:59:07]
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Re: Fright Night
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 03:46:32 AM AEST
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| nicely written....clear hint of the unknown and the invisible yet the suspense..!! |
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Re: Fright Night
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by LadyRose on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 05:59:25 AM AEST
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| very nicely written.......you had me scared there for a moment!!!!!! |
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Re: Fright Night
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by bcollard24 on
Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 09:19:53 AM AEST
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| I like it. You have the sense of surprise in there and it is well visualized with the words you used to describe it. |
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Re: Fright Night
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 07:58:18 PM AEST
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yuesh, creepy, the hair on my neck is up lol,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Fright Night
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by JohnRobbins on
Sunday, 20th September 2009 @ 10:48:13 AM AEST
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although I dont write in the same style I love
horror and dark poetry great build of suspense in every line.
really would have liked to have read more
good job |
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