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Filter My Mind
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 02:24:13 PM in AEST
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One piece at a time
I’m going to slowly filter my mind
I’ll clean it out so it would be so crammed
Start with a blank slate and be ready to be reprogrammed
So many mistakes I’ve made
So many different thoughts of every shade
I need to start a new
Maybe that will help me find what I need to do
Right now I’m confused
I’m tired of following this same ruse
Everyday it’s the same
It’s driving me insane
So I’m ready to be reprogrammed
My virus fill mind needs to be wiped
Clean to start anew
All I have to do is take the time
Copyright ©
Voice of the Silent
... [
2009-09-17 14:24:13]
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Re: Filter My Mind
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by elle on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 03:28:23 PM AEST
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| Sounds abit like some nano-futuristic prospect. . . good luck with that. ( very creative idea ) elle :) |
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Re: Filter My Mind
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by lesoleilnoire on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 07:01:33 PM AEST
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Nicely written. Great poem!
Heidi |
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Re: Filter My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th September 2009 @ 06:21:07 PM AEST
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kelly, love the metaphor here. And your wording and manner of
thought flowed perfectly right to the end. Clever and intriguing.
Great post, my friend. :)
~ Breezy
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