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ETERNITY
Contributed by
AnthonyGoodwinJnr
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Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 05:55:17 PM in AEST
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Eternity is really long especially near the end.
It’s about the same in the middle
But longer at the start.
It can be as long as ever it wants I really could not care,
For everyday of eternity
I have you in my heart.
Copyright ©
AnthonyGoodwinJnr
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2009-09-16 17:55:17]
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Re: ETERNITY
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:39:40 PM AEST
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Beautiful concise writing, I look forward to reading more of your work.
Heidi |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:43:49 PM AEST
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Thought provoking.
Blessings,
emy |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:45:52 PM AEST
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LOL. Funny, clever, memorable.
Yours is one of those types of poems that make me wish i had thought of the it......especially the first three lines.
Well thought out - well written - well done! |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 06:59:03 AM AEST
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excellent write, sweet,
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ETERNITY
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by Avataar on
Friday, 18th June 2010 @ 09:39:50 AM AEST
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| Encompasses the meaning of true love |
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