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Young Loss
Contributed by
robbieXXIII
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Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 05:40:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Dear man above, how can I be sure?
That the reason I once lived, lives no more,
I was born a child and have died a young man
From innocence to eagerness you have held my hand
But now you have brought me here,
Your reasoning for doing so is unclear
So I shall search then wait in this heavenly land
Waiting for you to unveil your plan
Copyright ©
robbieXXIII
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2009-09-16 17:40:22]
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Re: Young Loss
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:16:33 PM AEST
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| Short - Succinct - Emotive. Well written. |
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Re: Young Loss
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by lesoleilnoire on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:41:43 PM AEST
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| Nice piece of writing. You describe loss well here. |
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Re: Young Loss
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 6th October 2009 @ 04:31:18 PM AEST
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i can relate, for that "plan" i'm waiting along with ya =D
take care
-K.Z.
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