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The Wind
Contributed by
kritty
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Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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The wind is the messenger
of all the world.
It sends the words
to every boy and girl.
The wind tells you
the very secrets so true
and let's you know
when something awaits.
Either in hell,
or at heaven's gates.
The wind whispers
in your ear,
and let's you know
someone is finally here.
The wind brings
two lovers together
and causes emotions
to closely tether.
The wind fills
your head with dreams,
as it blows through the window
and the nightbird sings.
Copyright ©
kritty
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2003-03-31 16:05:00]
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Re: The Wind
(User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:11:21 PM AEST
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what an amazing poem! i love how you've personified the wind, and particularly like the stanza:
The wind whispers
in your ear,
and let's you know
someone is finally here.
Lovely.
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: The Wind
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by kritty on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:43:36 PM AEST
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| All I can say at this time is thank you, i'm so glad you liked it! =) |
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Re: The Wind
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by Ronald on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 08:10:13 AM AEST
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| Hey, this sounds good! Good poem! |
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