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Death
Contributed by
jessb3
on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 01:12:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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This thing inside is killing me
It rots from inside out
It takes control of all my thoughts
I am in constant doubt
A serpent of darkness within my veins
Brings only a plague of death
It coils itself around my life
Squeezing out my last breath
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2009-09-16 01:12:41]
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Re: Death
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 02:42:27 AM AEST
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| EXCELLENT work!! |
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Re: Death
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by LadyRose on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 10:58:45 AM AEST
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| this was nicely put yes.......feels so real...... |
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Re: Death
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by nirupam on
Friday, 17th December 2010 @ 02:38:37 AM AEST
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| brief and poignant....superbly worked out... |
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