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The Kite
Contributed by
navydocny
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Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:05:02 PM in AEST
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The kite is a dream
Tangled in the barbed wire
Waiting to be free
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Re: The Kite
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by elle on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:08:22 PM AEST
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so gentle, deep & true. . . considering where you are.
~peace. elle |
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Re: The Kite
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:15:33 PM AEST
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Beauty among the throns of life.
So there you are. I've been wondering about you.
It's great to know you are still safe.
Big huggs, smiles, blessings, safety,
emy |
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Re: The Kite
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:16:30 PM AEST
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This gave me a chill,
it so few words you captured the mood and feeling perfectly.
Profound my friend.
I hope you are well
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: The Kite
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by dirk-velvet on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 06:16:33 AM AEST
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What a lovely piece.
I like the word, "waiting".
For "now" it's tangled, but one day ...
it will not.
Yes,
What a lovely little piece.
Dirk-Velvet
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Re: The Kite
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by spud on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 07:55:38 AM AEST
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Should imagine where you are, there are a lot
of dreams waiting to be free.
Keep your head down, mate!
Nice poetic sentiment.
Tommy
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Re: The Kite
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 07:06:37 AM AEST
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excellent haiku:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: The Kite
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by Lilymaemax on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 01:31:28 PM AEST
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| Love this imagery .It invokes pleasant images of kites and innocence of childrens games but you feel this is wrong because of where we know you areJust beautiful.Lilymae |
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Re: The Kite
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by karoody on
Thursday, 19th November 2009 @ 01:13:13 PM AEST
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(((((Steve))))))
I've missed you
I see you've mastered the haiku
So many thoughts and visions
Not a word wasted....
Hugs and smiles to you
Kara |
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