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stria. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 09:56:18 PM in AEST
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my muse
is but a stria. . .
a mark upon the wall
hardly even noticed
a haunting
in the hall
& as my feelings falter
to designate my pen
I sense
the hidden witness
of a lonely scribe
within. . .
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-09-15 21:56:18]
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Re: stria. . .
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:29:06 PM AEST
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Ohhhh this is so well written, a little sad.
I sense the hidden witness of a lonely scribe within.......... I so felt this hun.
Hugs
Michelle |
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Re: stria. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 12:38:37 AM AEST
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I find myself disagreeing with the first four lines, Ms Elle. :-) Your muse is but an inspiration to make me want to write always. Believe me, we notice. Everyone seems to have a vocabulary. It's what we do with it, and honey, you do it well!!!
As for lonliness..well, um, hug? |
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Re: stria. . .
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by spud on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 07:58:00 AM AEST
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You're so right. Well scripted!
Tommy
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Re: stria. . .
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 08:36:45 AM AEST
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This conveys, to me, a feeling I get from time to time. The feeling that the words I write aren't really mine, and that I'm only a vessel for them. I end up feeling like an outside observer, a "hidden witness" such as you describe it.
Once again what you've written speaks to me on a level I can't quite define. I'm reminded of a little ditty I wrote long ago.
"I really don't feel like writing,
but I'm writing any way,
to try to make a something
of the nothing I have to say." |
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Re: stria. . .
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 06:56:36 AM AEST
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| Yep, I like this one. It could be a nod toward writers block as suggested by another comment or maybe it's saying that nobody really listens to what we write afterall, not sure but I know it's well done. |
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Re: stria. . .
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by ming on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 09:24:52 AM AEST
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| You teach us with your elagance...thank you. |
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