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A FATAL ATTRACTION
Contributed by
TsunamiWaverider
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Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:11:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Like a moth around a candles flame
is how i'm drawn to you,
unable to resist your charm
there's nothing i can do,
and like that moth who flys too close
and sets its wing on fire,
i find i too have gone too close
because i'm burning with desire.
John A .Kent © 25/2/2008
Copyright ©
TsunamiWaverider
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2009-09-15 19:11:30]
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Re: A FATAL ATTRACTION
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by elle on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:32:52 PM AEST
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Re: A FATAL ATTRACTION
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:48:21 PM AEST
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I love the simile/metaphor used here. Great flow! I can visualize this poem in my mind.
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Re: A FATAL ATTRACTION
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:00:25 PM AEST
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You wrote a beauiful poem with just a few lines. I enjoyed this.
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