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Fruitful September
Contributed by
windowguy
on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 12:26:31 PM in AEST
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Haiku
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Big, ripe, purple plums
Hang heavy within arms reach
Tempting hungry eyes.
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2009-09-15 12:26:31] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Fruitful September
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 07:00:58 PM AEST (User
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Way to go dude ... now I'm hungry! :P
And with those descriptions its not just the eyes that
are hungry. Your haiku makes the mouth water ...
well done!!
~ Breezy
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Re: Fruitful September
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 07:29:05 AM AEST (User
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yummy excellent haiku:)
hugs n' love nessa |
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