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Sand and Water
Contributed by
KrisWithinYou
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Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 12:41:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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A sand structure, beautiful it stands.
Water missing ground, but the world doesn't stop.
Eyes behold beauty from nature molded man-made.
Eyes behold sighted, elevated sands.
Giving off screaming motions.
Day dreams twisted into actual waves rising high.
In amazement, monsterous waters take craft.
The sand again set firm.
There lasts your memories, a past handled castle.
The ocean lay calm.
The day moves along.
Moving, moving along.
Copyright ©
KrisWithinYou
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2009-09-15 00:41:22]
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Re: Sand and Water
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 02:05:53 AM AEST
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Re: Sand and Water
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 11:41:44 PM AEST
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A delightful poem.
Michelle |
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