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Better Day
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 06:34:26 PM in AEST
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I don't know if I've posted this yet or not so I'm going to start at the bottom of my poem list and work my way up.. Say that know a lot of my submissions from now on will be old poem I wrote a long time ago..Hope you like this one
I just don’t feel right
I’m leaving home tomorrow night
I don’t know what I’m going to do
Being away from everyone I know especially you
I’ll miss it all
But I need to get away
Here I’m set up for a big fall
There would be nothing you could say
I have to get away from here it’s all falling apart
I need a new start
I need to just leave and get away
And start off tomorrow away from it all and make it a better day
Because here it’s just misery
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Re: Better Day
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 10:24:57 PM AEST
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| Well done. |
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Re: Better Day
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 08:21:03 PM AEST
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kelly this is just fascinating and reminds me of one of my favourite
beatle songs. The last line really impacts the piece. I hope those
better days are full and present now. :)
good post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Better Day
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 08:37:43 PM AEST
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This almost had me running for the door with you!!!!
Hope it all worked out
Cheers,
Tony |
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Re: Better Day
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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i can relate well to this... but after leaving home and living somewhere else for a while, things werent 'right' even tho i felt more 'free' from the misery. i would always miss my room and such... i would get homesick
anyway, u've described your emotions nicely, and i'm sure many hav gone thru this wanting to run away.
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Better Day
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by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 29th November 2009 @ 03:55:37 PM AEST
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| This seems almost like a song to me, I actualy got the urge to play along |
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