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the last time we tried. . .
Contributed by
elle
on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 05:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
drugabuse
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let us see
if we can control the ants. . .
(precariously)
with sound
they keep attacking the hedge
(no tolerance)
"you know that control is an illusion"
thought the hare (statue)
perched doubtfully
on the front lawn. . .
Copyright ©
elle
... [
2009-09-14 17:51:41]
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Re: the last time we tried. . .
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 12:05:53 AM AEST
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So ask Alice, when she's ten feet taaaalllllll.
This is interesting and gavel me a genuine chuckle then I thought, if I am misunderstanding this then you may be insulted I chuckled. So, I apologize if any offense is rendered but this bunny statue thinking control is an illusion just really made me think.. whoa dude, acid trip.
Tim
(who always enjoys your poetry just doesn't always seem to understand it)
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Re: the last time we tried. . .
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by ming on
Friday, 25th September 2009 @ 09:27:28 AM AEST
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| Whoa is right! Speaks volumes...as always. Love this! |
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