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What would you say
Contributed by
Keykey
on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 05:34:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If I cut my wrist and I start to bleed
would you care about my wants; would you care about my needs
If I'm not able to see another day
What would you do; what would you say
If I jumped out the window that is five stories high
would you laugh of joy or would you cry
If I start taking pills and I know it's not okay
What would you do; what would you say
If you said it would harm me and I do it anyway
If I get hit by standing out on the roadway
If I said I want to leave the earth cause I don't want to stay
What would you do; what would you say
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Keykey
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2009-09-14 17:34:44]
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Re: What would you say
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 10:46:53 PM AEST
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| Great poem actually Keykey, but needs a little work to make it 'flow'. |
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Re: What would you say
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 06:23:48 PM AEST
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No one could read this and not feel the pain written into it. As someone who has been there himself, I know how much it hurts.
I wouldn't have thought it possible back then, but it does get better. It just takes time and the support of someone who cares about you.
Hold on a little longer, and you'll see what I mean. I speak from experience.
And in answer to the question in your poem, I'd say, "Please, don't do it," and I'd offer you a shoulder to lean on. |
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Re: What would you say
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Thursday, 17th September 2009 @ 03:27:28 PM AEST
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I would say it's your choice.
Compelling reading.
Believe.
xx
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