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Ensuite Isolation
Contributed by
woodymiles
on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 11:54:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Doppler conversations
Angry doors
Ivory clanging
Stalag vertebrae
Human corsair bravery
Suicide cables
Ward doctor brevity
The balm of soothing words
Injured on the jagged distressed rocks
My heart racing
A booming engine
“She's gonna blow”
Run away
Save yourselves
Cordon off the area
And rebuild him
Make him straight again
A proper little gentleman
The boy usher who died at the alter
Outside of acceptable limits
Inside the dark tomb
Forgotten (forsaken)
Copyright ©
woodymiles
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2009-09-14 11:54:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Ensuite Isolation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 04:48:24 PM AEST (User
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Good stuff! |
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Re: Ensuite Isolation
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 22nd September 2009 @ 07:36:39 AM AEST (User
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Hey, I can feel the panic and desperation in that. Excellent, to the point and thoughtful. Well written. |
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