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I can’t let go.
Contributed by
bhavik
on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 11:40:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I can’t let go, the hug that filled my senses with warmth.
I can’t let go, the hand that lead me to the land of love.
I can’t let go, those beautiful eyes that added color to my soul.
I can’t let go, your fragrance, every time you were around,
it perked me up.
I can’t let go, your long black hair in which I seem to be lost perpetually.
I can’t let go, a tear from my eye because I don’t have you around,
to wipe it off my cheek.
I can’t let go, of myself because someday I am sure, you will come back to me.
I can’t let go, of your memories that form a part of every step I take.
I can’t let go, of anything that is related to you,
I can’t let go, because I don’t want to,
stay with me honey pie, i am incomplete without you.
“Love you” is what you told me many times in a day,
I miss it.
I can’t let go,
if I do, will lose the essence of my being.
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bhavik
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2009-09-13 23:40:20]
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Re: I can’t let go.
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 04:45:40 AM AEST
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very heartfelt write
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Re: I can’t let go.
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by christinalwk on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 10:14:34 PM AEST
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| Very emotional! Great piece... although at times thw wording seems a bit awkward, otherwise good! |
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