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The Jump!
Contributed by
gribba
on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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This night
as the new year makes
it's elegant entrance
I sit on the roof top
of a tall building.
The glamorous night has
a soothing and gentle song to it
and the stars seem to shine
just to the rhythm of it.
I sit here,
for one purpose only
and the moon smiles ironically at me.
the moon,
high up in the forever sky.
shines so full and bright
the only one how knows my intention
and he waves me,
my last goodbye.
Copyright ©
gribba
... [
2003-03-31 12:05:00]
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Re: The Jump!
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by Percursors on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 12:26:20 PM AEST
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| That’s so sad and beautiful at the same time...in the begging it’s like wow this person has a perfect life and is just sucking in the beauty of the night sky then in the end it’s a twist that your going to kill yourself and everything really pulls together...this is very well written... |
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Re: The Jump!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st April 2003 @ 05:03:48 AM AEST
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This is a really beautiful yet sad poem. I really loved it.
sleepless_siren |
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Re: The Jump!
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by Wrybod on
Sunday, 13th April 2003 @ 06:00:40 AM AEST
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You set me up!.......and then .........
very good write but I will never forgive you.
Seriously I think the least you could do is read the last poem on my list (same subject) |
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