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I cry over you

Contributed by fluffyrice on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:06:10 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



The love I feel is real, it hurts to say it is. I feel my heart thud faster and faster until it feels like it will burst from my chest. You look into my eyes and I feel so special, but I know it's not true. You give me a kiss and walk your way home as I stare at you from behind. I stand and wave at you, unmoving, until you continuously look behind and see me waving. You wave back and keep walking as I still stand there knowing your feelings are untrue. I want to ask you but you give the same answer, so I just keep smiling and waving. I get home and cry looking at myself, knowing it all wasn't true, and the next day you tell me its over, and I fall on the ground and cry to your words. You say you loved me but you never did, and I knew it from the start. I lay there as you walk away and say goodbye, and I take one good look at you and you're smiling. It feels like a punch in the face, I cry and cry until he is out of sight. I don't go home, I stay where I am, as still as my heart, and close my eyes as I slowly fade away from the world.




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Re: I cry over you (User Rating: 1 )
by Keykey on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 06:44:38 PM AEST
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I almost cried. This was real touching to me. Great poem.


Re: I cry over you (User Rating: 1 )
by bcollard24 on Friday, 18th September 2009 @ 09:26:26 AM AEST
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An amazing work. I could truly feel how desperate you felt in the situation. You conveyed the feelings of hopelessness and despair very well.




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