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Myself
Contributed by
Keykey
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Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:34:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I wish everybody would leave me alone
I know my mistakes and I know what's right
I'm tired of people telling me I'm wrong
I'm not letting you boss me without a fight
I'm tired of people telling me what to do
Of course you don't know me very well
Just let me do me and I'll let you do you
I know my status as you can tell
I know how things go I don't need your direction
I can care for myself I don't need your protecton
I know you don't really care you just want me to be someone else
Well I don't care what you think I'm still going to be myself
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Keykey
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2009-09-13 14:34:01]
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Re: Myself
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by Hatemetodaii on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 02:41:18 PM AEST
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I liked your poem, and I think alot of people can relate it. The only thing I'd suggest to make it flow as it's suppose to would be to add a few comma's in certain spots :)
very well done though. |
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Re: Myself
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 03:02:12 PM AEST
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| I can definitely relate to this poem. I wish people would just mind their own buiness and keep their noses out of other people's1 good poem!!! |
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