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my bubble. . .
Contributed by
elle
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Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:17:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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consumed by. . .
emptiness
seeps through the surface
small indentation
pierced indication
of collaspe
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-09-13 05:17:34]
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Re: my bubble. . .
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 06:41:28 AM AEST
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my dear elle,
oh sweetie this is enormous! It's incredible how you
can take so few words and cultivate an emotion to
the point where your reader actually breathes it.
Your work is unbelievable.
And this .. damn. This is just too real for me.
It's unbearably emotive, hun.
Excellent post!
~ Breezy
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Re: my bubble. . .
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 09:16:21 AM AEST
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| You misspelled 'collapse' Elle. Don't forget to double check before posting. |
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Re: my bubble. . .
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 10:53:03 AM AEST
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Aw, huge hug, my dear Elle. I hates it when bubbles burst. Except maybe those ones ya' blow. Perhaps, buy a bottle and go for it. They can be fun in a simple sort of way and you can forget about your troubles, at least for the fifteen minutes it takes to use the bottle up.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: my bubble. . .
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by hetlerkh on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 04:50:16 PM AEST
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rocks ! m/
heh u can write my whole poems i wrote till now and give all same emotions and meaning with some words !
lol
keep it up ...
really awsome
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Re: my bubble. . .
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by one-curly-fry on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 03:51:22 AM AEST
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Man, I've been there.. You really know how to use ur words - for such a short piece, you again make a powerful statement.
The last line left me stumped and feeling a little down...
Great write Elle.. hope someone is there to give u a little warmth. :-)
- Tim |
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Re: my bubble. . .
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 05:35:35 PM AEST
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| I can't decide whether this is about freedom, individuality or regret! Nice lay out though. |
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