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Time to fall,finally....
Contributed by
timmewolff
on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 10:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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sometimes i sit back
and wonder why
is it worth living
or should i just die
ive been used
and thrown to the side
nothing left to give
why should i bother, bother to live
i want her so bad
i need her love
if this is the truth
give me a shove
off the ledge
into the dark sky
end all my pain
let me die
i dont wanna be alone
from now till the end
cant you see my mind
my will
starting to bend
how much pain
can i stand
im all alone
i have no one
i lost evrything
even my daughter,my son
i took a shot
i gave it my all
give me a push
let me fall
true love is dead
it is all gone
no one for me
i can finally see
time for me to fall
time to be free
inside is suppose to count
for who you are
but we know not
for we all fall
for who is hot
and what someone's got
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2003-03-31 10:45:00]
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Re: Time to fall,finally....
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by Percursors on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 11:31:37 AM AEST
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this is a good one...
*tears* for you |
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Re: Time to fall,finally....
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Wednesday, 2nd April 2003 @ 05:46:49 AM AEST
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Cold hard but with a realism, a good combination.
As always everyone as there own veiws on the hardships we all face in life, You have shown what happens the many that are ignored, or just thrown away.
Good luck with your future you are good with words you know how to make them sing. |
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