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Blind
Contributed by
sweetvet2b
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Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 10:17:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Do you see yourself?
You know what you're looking for
Thrive above the best
You know no less
I can see you.
You're missing something
The thrill of life
It is not accomplishments,
but memories that will suffice
Do you see me?
I don't care what people think
Say what's on my mind
Pretend to be fine
I can see myself.
Looking for love
Some stability in life
I have no accomplishments
No memories
That i wish to remember
I will help you find yourself
If you promise
To help me find myself
Copyright ©
sweetvet2b
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2009-09-12 22:17:28]
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Re: Blind
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 04:09:28 AM AEST
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| Profound. |
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Re: Blind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 08:12:39 AM AEST
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What an incredibly provocative thought. Yes, we are (all of us)
quite blind when we look in that metaphoric mirror. Very rarely
is it ever a friend. Sometimes how the world sees us needs to be
expressed in order for us to see ourselves. But believing it? Well,
that's a wholly different animal. Wonderfully sagacious, this is.
Great post!
~ Breezy
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Re: Blind
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by Ambivalence on
Monday, 14th September 2009 @ 10:49:43 PM AEST
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i think this poem says a whole deal of things...
we all hav goals, dreams, desires, etc... and i believe we should all help each other accomplish/achieve them. thats wat i got from this. great job
take care
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