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Levitating Broom
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 07:49:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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magic utensil,
floating high into the clouds,
riding cloudy waves
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-09-12 19:49:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Levitating Broom
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 05:50:53 PM AEST (User
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Like a body needs exercise, so does a mind. Just keep doing what you're doing.
I like what I've read so far. I think the haiku is an appropriate vehicle for the way you write - nice, compact kernels of thought. |
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