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The Storm
Contributed by
kims4ever
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Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 10:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The sky blackens, it begins to grow cold,
My anger rises, it has become so bold,
An emotion I always have to control,
The anger burns as it takes it's toll,
All of a sudden I feel alone,
With noone to rely upon, i'm all on my own,
Only when i close my eyes, is when I truly see,
The raging storm, inside of me,
The wind starts to blow so hard, I can't stand,
But it's hard to face this wind, with all of lifes demands,
I can see the lightning, with all it's glory,
But the lightning will pass, as will my untold story,
The thunder cries out, it echoes in me,
For the Emotions it wants, I cannot agree,
The rain begins to fall, from the dark despairing sky,
And from all of my questions, my favorite is why?,
The storm subsides as I tame my anger,
And I open my eyes, still a stranger.
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Re: The Storm
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by Percursors on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 11:36:14 AM AEST
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| This is a good one...I loved it...your right i've felt just like that before and i know a lot of other people who have also...good write... |
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Re: The Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 04:35:09 PM AEST
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"Only when i close my eyes, is when I truly see,
The raging storm, inside of me," great lines, |
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Re: The Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 04:37:23 PM AEST
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| great poem i meant to say to! sorry, dunno why i did that:O |
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Re: The Storm
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 07:16:50 PM AEST
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| Beautiful work, nicely written with so much feeling. |
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Re: The Storm
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 04:05:35 AM AEST
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| well expressed emotions in a desparate question. I've suggested an answer in "The first and last commandment" but completely missed the vivid portrayal of emotion that you have here. |
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