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betrayal

Contributed by hetlerkh on Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 03:52:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

first when u open ur eyes to the world
u put all your faith in god
n all trust and hope in people
n the happy things u have as reasons to get up when ur down

then when u stable and everything starts to collapse
your got just watches u and just pass
people betrayal u n stab u in your back
problems start to harass
the happy things u had are gone and turned to worse
turned to be reasons to die

ur lost and u cant find a safe place
doors are closed in your face
everything is closed upon u
everything is wrong
and your alone

everything closes
except for hell
it opens wide for u
after u collapsed and on ur knees fell
smoke from my head i smell
more about my self i wont tell
the word : (LOVE) i cant spell
my heart people forced me to sell
don't ask me why i say this
in your face i don't wanna more yell

that's the way i became like this
that's why people steal kill get drugs and do sins
that's why i hate u people
that's why i hate u god
i didn't choose to be that
i am already dead ....suicide is just the funeral i have been waiting for ,,

Copyright © hetlerkh ... [ 2009-09-12 15:52:29]
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Re: betrayal (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyRose on Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 03:55:44 AM AEST
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wow!!!........remember these words you use.....dont know what to say but to remind you that this is exactly what the devil wants you to feel,and it so sad......I wont betray you and tell you lies.My heart goes out to a lost soul......dont you want to come home?He never leaves you dont make a mistake......He loves you dont be so blind........

LadyRose

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