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Two Weeks Have Gone
Contributed by
CwisssStunnaaa
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Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 02:51:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Two weeks have gone
Sense you have passed
Was it my fault
Why you got in that crash
I feel like it is
And these fealings i cant bare
I told you i would be by your side forever
But this time i wasnt there
Two weeks have gone
Sense i have seen the sun
Cos everywhere i go
Reminds me of all weve done
Not ready to face the world
And thier happy ways
Cos my days are done being happy
Sense you have passed away
Two weeks have gone
And im week inside
Wishing you were here
Right by my side
So i can kiss and hold you
And tell you that i care
Maybe if i did that more
You would still be here
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2009-09-12 02:51:55]
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Re: Two Weeks Have Gone
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by lesoleilnoire on
Saturday, 12th September 2009 @ 08:48:50 PM AEST
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| Very emotional piece. It nearly brought me to tears. I'm am sorry about this difficult time you are going through. Don't blame yourself. I enjoyed this sad but well-written piece. |
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Re: Two Weeks Have Gone
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by CwisssStunnaaa on
Sunday, 13th September 2009 @ 05:03:39 AM AEST
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Sense i have seen the sun
should be sense i haven't seen the sun |
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