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The way past the leopard
Contributed by
incognito_bombastus
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Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 04:36:34 PM in AEST
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ambiguous
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Are those fires burning
As I’m lost in this prison wood fallow?
My valiant heart is yearning
As I spy in the nite for my shadow.
Alone on my estates,
Lost in oscillate frite,
Feeding & disgusting me
Searching for my site.
There is no guide to dreams,
No lite to mirror in life,
No razor to cut the darkness
Or slit the fabric of life.
The flames are burning somewhere,
Over the hills I know
& in this nite I’ll get there
So keep the fires aglow.
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incognito_bombastus
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2009-09-10 16:36:34]
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Re: The way past the leopard
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th September 2009 @ 06:01:03 AM AEST
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A very good poem with great use of rhyme.
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Re: The way past the leopard
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by Duke on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 02:16:42 PM AEST
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As good a description for loneliness as I've read.
Lost in body is one,
Lost in soul is another
Duke |
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