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the loom
Contributed by
elle
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Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 06:59:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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smiling now, karma
checks both sides of the temple
warp & weft complete
Copyright ©
elle
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2009-09-09 18:59:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the loom
(User Rating: 1 ) by MaggieRigby on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 07:41:35 PM AEST (User
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I like your use of imagry in the poem, and the personification of karma. :) |
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Re: the loom
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 09:28:46 PM AEST (User
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This Karma or action is inevitable to the mind.
The pacified soul watches and smiles. thank you elle for your message.
-yours
venkat
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Re: the loom
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 05:02:48 PM AEST (User
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beautiful...
hugs n' love nessa |
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