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Relax
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 09:35:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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.....I ,me
tired.....
yes.....
......headache
......sore feet
long day.....
.....rest......stres......
.....remember this
forgot that......
.....I need some cash
eyes hurt.......
tired........
exams in two months...
I must eat..........sleep
.......assignment due friday......
neck is pulling stiff.......
.....need a shower.......tired.....
assignment...............work tomorrow
get up early.....sleep.....
Relax......write some poetry
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LadyRose
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2009-09-09 09:35:30]
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Re: Relax
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by spud on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 09:46:13 AM AEST
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Hi,
Last line - spot on!
Tommy
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Re: Relax
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 10th September 2009 @ 01:15:53 AM AEST
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nicely said... the ending line is the best :D
good luck with setting your priorities/duties,
i can relate...
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: Relax
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by lilpiggiepie on
Sunday, 22nd November 2009 @ 08:01:49 PM AEST
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| so true. awsome poem. |
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