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Crayon Heart
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
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Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 09:56:22 PM in AEST
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LoveRemembered
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Let me draw this story out for you.
I pick up my over-used crayon
It's paper's torn and it's been worn dull
Still, I drag the purple across the page
And create a misshapen heart
White cracks peek through the
Otherwise solid line
Such is our life
Carefully I tear this heart down the middle
Now do you see?
Copyright ©
razorbladekisses
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2009-09-08 21:56:22]
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Re: Crayon Heart
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 06:57:02 AM AEST
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A very clever write. I loved the structure.
-Phil |
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Re: Crayon Heart
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by ming on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 08:29:47 AM AEST
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| Loved this...I saw it every step of the way. Great write. |
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Re: Crayon Heart
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by LadyRose on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 11:13:28 AM AEST
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| this is cutely explained yet sad.......to stress out a broken heart for the one that does not understand.......clever indeed. |
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Re: Crayon Heart
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by The_Unknown on
Friday, 16th April 2010 @ 10:47:29 AM AEST
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Cute, sad, simple. I like it.
-t_U |
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