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Lover in Malice
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 06:19:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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He pulls her into him
she dances, dances for him
dresses for him, coughs for him
falls when he shoves,
bleeds when he cuts
diamond eyes
when you weren't looking, I took a pill
and laughed and cried
throat running and tasting of poison
I took a line, traced it against my skin
Let it go where it went
wondering,
whether it made a difference
and not feeling it if it did.
The mind runs, leaving thoughts incomplete, rapidly
I can't grasp, can't care
In this moment, I smile
the perfect drug
what do you expect of me?
To bend for you, while you
lie here and there
demanding the rhythmic rolling of my hips
an opening in a severed sky
your mind reduced to
Euphoria?
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Inevitable
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2009-09-08 18:19:06]
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Re: Lover in Malice
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 06:48:23 AM AEST
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I can see many similarities with my own writing style in this, so I can appreciate it more. It was an immaculately woven, sensual piece which pushed all the right poetic buttons. Another fantastic write.
-Phil |
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Re: Lover in Malice
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 10:40:50 AM AEST
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| Phil said it right. |
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