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a thousand doors
Contributed by
ming
on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 09:37:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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faithful
through
the night
becoming
all of heaven
and
the edge of earth
alone
in the mouth
of a tiger
illusion?
reality
far stranger
bare
emotional
bones
layer
upon
layer
of realities
the infinity
of touch
me.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2009-09-08 09:37:13] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: a thousand doors
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 01:53:43 PM AEST (User
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You built it up to a crescendo, and then ended it so powerfully. Good work.
-Phil
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