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I am
Contributed by
LadyRose
on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 07:49:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am in essence
......women
female I am
I do as I can.....
forever receiving penetrating objects........
......words said
.......abuse digested
I am women
baring children
......milk in my breast
I feed those around me
........motherly
friend I am
to whom ever needs it
....strenght I must give
to those who are weak.
sometimes they forget about me...
this women I am
I at times stand alone
......on my own
raising my offspring
I am....
an angel without wings.......
when I fall....
......who will catch me?
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LadyRose
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2009-09-08 07:49:26]
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 07:59:20 AM AEST
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God and that person who would really love you for who you are. lol... not all men are evil ******.
:-)
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Re: I am
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by spud on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 08:15:21 AM AEST
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Hi, Ladyrose
Most women never fall cos they have decent
men around to prop them up.
But yes, I can see how this would apply to
those left alone to cope.
Well formed - well written.
Tommy
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Re: I am
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 01:50:58 PM AEST
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A very passionate write. I may be a man (and a young one at that) but I think women just want to be treated like individuals, like genuine human beings. They want to be seen. Truly seen. Not the flesh, only the soul. Is that really too much for you to hope for?
-Phil |
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Re: I am
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by allie_07 on
Tuesday, 25th January 2011 @ 07:17:40 PM AEST
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| this is very powerful! |
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