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The Broken Pritty blue skies
Contributed by
socialmisfit
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Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 12:47:42 AM in AEST
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out on broken sidewalks
i remembered as the sky divides
how the rain sounds as loud as a lover's words
and the rain, its coming down
so i thought
that you lived inside of the raindrops
falling like regret
while the clouds forget
and your words, make me remember
so i shiver in your presence
as you fall around me
and out on cracked sidewalks
i like feeling you soak through my skin
so i listen intently
as you fall in tidal waves
and your memory paints the sky
while i drink heartache from broken clouds
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Re: The Broken Pritty blue skies
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 8th September 2009 @ 12:32:40 PM AEST
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This is superb. Creative and totally absorbing!
-Phil |
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Re: The Broken Pritty blue skies
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th May 2014 @ 01:36:17 AM AEST
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sad, but so enchantingly beautiful!!
hugs n' love nessa |
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