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Tu es mi amor
Contributed by
youngpoet1989
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Monday, 31st March 2003 @ 09:14:06 AM in AEST
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Tu es mi amante
y suyo
nosotros somo
parecido petalos puesto un rosa
nuestro corazons es unido
de un amor ese voluntad ultimo siempre.
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Re: Tu es mi amor
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by banjo on
Thursday, 17th April 2003 @ 01:11:18 PM AEST
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Saying "Tu es mi amor" is like saying "You is my love." Should be "Tu eres mi amor."
also s/b son unidos
nosotros somos
i can't tell what some of it should be. but the grammar really needs work. |
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Re: Tu es mi amor
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by youngpoet1989 on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 12:15:01 PM AEST
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OKAY! damn your so picky, it was just a little spelling grammar mistake, so
GET OVER IT! |
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Re: Tu es mi amor
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by Essentially9 on
Wednesday, 19th May 2004 @ 09:12:07 PM AEST
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kind of scary that i was on the same page as banjo there. yeah, your grammar does need work, but yeah half the people on this site cant do correct english anyways. then more than half cant read spanish.
escribas mas! |
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