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Death is all around me
Contributed by
LadyRose
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Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 11:55:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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DEATH IS ALL AROUND ME
lost a friend to breast cancer last week
had to lay her body under a blanket of sand
she was more like a mother to me
she was the one who would always understand
my best friend lost her mother yesterday
they say it was an accident
she was also my mother
I felt every bit of pain my friend felt
I am loosing a friend of mine
our friendship is dying
its something I cant deny
we are no longer companions
Death you are taking people close to me
dont come any closer!
I already feel so empty
These people are lost forever.......
Death you are giving me a chance
to rectify what I can
to live each day as if its the last
to appreciate what I have......
I hate your gutts
But I respect your lessons
on earth we are running out of time
we should live as though now we are dying
Copyright ©
LadyRose
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2009-09-07 11:55:55]
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Re: Death is all around me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 01:26:42 PM AEST
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Tragic indeed. But I like how you can be optimistic, even in the darkest depths of despair.
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Re: Death is all around me
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by kye on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 05:21:52 PM AEST
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Death leaves us feeling defenseless, vulnerable, helpless and angry. I wonder why we have to lose more than one at a time, in regards to the people we care about? My heart and condolescences go out to you and I saw your inner strength in your writing.
Your poem touched my heart and it is my prayer that you will manage thru these difficult times.
Kye- |
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