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Heavenly Temptation
Contributed by
Buggsy
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Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 11:12:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Forbidden treasure and lustful pleasure
Make for a sweet yet deadly temptation.
Beneath the leaping fire of sunset flames
Secret embraces conceal the fixation.
Sinful, yet pure heaven just to hold and touch;
The lines between right and wrong fade.
A beautiful temptress, a seductive queen;
Her lips on mine, our arms entwined forbade.
Wishing for one night together,
To fulfil our one, most wicked desire.
Just one night; only one is all I ask.
From sunset flames to sunrise fire.
Life is too short and dull to not take the chance,
For a reward that far outweighs the cost.
I may give up my place in heaven for it,
But I'd do it again even if my soul was lost!
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Buggsy
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2009-09-07 11:12:34]
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Re: Heavenly Temptation
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by spud on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 12:49:52 PM AEST
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Hi,
If your soul is true, there may be a heaven on
earth!
Good luck to you.
Tommy
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Re: Heavenly Temptation
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by PoluxTheFifth on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 12:51:22 PM AEST
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well chosen words, beautiful structure.. you are right about the tittle. It deserves a better one..what about:
"the price" |
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