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Color My Existence (Beautiful)
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
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Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 11:12:24 AM in AEST
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If you were to gaze down at me
From way up there
Paint would slip out your mouth
Like a giant waterfall
And fill up my lungs
Coloring in my heart
In a world full of black and white
You're the artist walking around
Painting your colors everywhere
You always can paint a smile on my face
You make the rainy days fade away
And fill them in with yellow sunshine
You add the color
To my life
You paint me beautiful
If we were merely figures on a page
With me here and you there
I would fold this paper until
You were next to me
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razorbladekisses
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2009-09-07 11:12:24]
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Re: Color My Existence (Beautiful)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 11:18:23 AM AEST
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This is spectacular. A creative, beautiful poem.
5/5.
-Phil |
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Re: Color My Existence (Beautiful)
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by LadyRose on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 12:50:44 PM AEST
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| this is so gorgeously put together.I can almost taste the paint you speak of....... |
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Re: Color My Existence (Beautiful)
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th September 2009 @ 01:40:13 PM AEST
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The last stanza is what makes this worth the read.
A wonderful, fanciful image (and one I'd wish for, too.) |
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