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Light Fight
Contributed by
razorbladekisses
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Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 01:03:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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These conflicting feelings inside me are so thick
You could cut them with a knife
I feel if I were to scream out these
Emotions in the bliss of night
You could see them moving
Bright lights twisting within one another
Trying hard to choke the other
And they wouldn't stop
Not until they exploded
One explosion of light
And nothing would be left
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Re: Light Fight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 07:47:18 AM AEST
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I can feel the torment that this conflict creates. Your
words are well woven and placed. And ... this fight --
ah, such is the way of life, no? It seems we are in a
constant state of conflict over something or another.
I love the idea of the two emotions taking the form
of light. Wonderfully descriptive.
~ Breezy
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Re: Light Fight
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 10:39:28 AM AEST
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I liked the imagery and the metaphor. A very well constructed poem.
-Phil |
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Re: Light Fight
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by LadyRose on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 11:58:41 AM AEST
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| I love this,sounds so real to the strenght of emotion it self....... |
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Re: Light Fight
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 09:39:46 AM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings...
hugs n' love nessa |
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