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Hill Rolling
Contributed by
lesoleilnoire
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Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 04:47:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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Starting at the top,
spinning dizzy dreams downhill,
unraveling fun
Copyright ©
lesoleilnoire
... [
2009-09-06 16:47:42]
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Re: Hill Rolling
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 05:50:31 PM AEST
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I like this haiku I see you have a talent
for writting haiku poems
and you make them very enjoyable to read
good job on capturing some childhood fun |
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Re: Hill Rolling
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by deadwriter on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 06:24:49 PM AEST
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Great write. I grew up near a hill like this. It provided great memories.
Deadwriter
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Re: Hill Rolling
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by emystar on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST
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Awesome. You've done it again.
smiles, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Hill Rolling
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th September 2009 @ 10:22:09 AM AEST
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Some lovely imagery and a sublime elegance.
-Phil |
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