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From Within.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 04:47:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I love you so much that it manifests within
I wish I could explain, but I don't know where to begin
So I'm just going to start peeling off my skin
Let it pour out from within
Straight from the eternal seed
Razorblades against my heart
Pay close attention as I bleed
Watch yourself pour from me
In endless streams
I love you so much you even bleed through my dreams
Weeping crosses could never be this sacred
Stripped completely naked
My love is all that really exists
And I've got nails driven through my wrists
Because I'm hanging on every word you said
Seven years of life I've bled
All in the name of truth
Carving you poems into my bones
Carrying the proof
And each breath I take is it's own confession
Every tear a silent precession
Cast into a river that flows to find you
Because I'd build you a thousand homes
Just for a chance to rest beside you
But all I can do is put these words on your screen
Write you poems that represent my dreams
And pray to God one day you understand...
That the only thing it's ever been about....
Is love.
Because some things in life truly are genuine.
Copyright ©
bleedthelove
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2009-09-04 16:47:03]
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Re: From Within.
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by InfinitePoet on
Saturday, 5th September 2009 @ 12:34:46 AM AEST
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Wonderful!!! I feel your pain and confusion through these words! Your excellent at getting your feelings into words!!1 Keep Writing & Keep Posting!
Peace & Hugz,
Dana |
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Re: From Within.
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 6th September 2009 @ 10:19:05 AM AEST
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This is wonderful poetry. You avoided all the usual cliches and presented something that was beautiful and unique. The imagery was magical.
5/5.
-Phil |
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Re: From Within.
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 9th September 2009 @ 09:44:23 AM AEST
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strong images, excellent expression of feelings,
hugs n' love nessa |
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