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never walk away
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Friday, 4th September 2009 @ 01:22:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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I feel your heart beating next to mine, thomp thomp as they entertwine.
your sweet kisses in my mind, for ever till the end of time.
your gental touch on my skin, we brought each other places we''d never been.
In my heart you''ll always stay, and I''ll always long for another day.
Now as I close my mind to sleep, I pray the lord my soul to keep.
If I see another day, I promise this time I would stay and never walk away.
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2009-09-04 13:22:37] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: never walk away
(User Rating: 1 ) by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Monday, 21st September 2009 @ 05:28:28 PM AEST (User
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A very pretty little piece. Just a shame you couldn't keep the rhythm through all the lines.
I did enjoy it's simplicity. Well done |
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